I’m a complete amateur but here goes.
Silence echoes in a tomb,
Laughter cackles in a hearth.
The corpse worshiped,
With homes forgotten.
Just a shortie.
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Tells a great story with such little words! I like it. And you’re humble. That’s always a good thing.
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Thank you, that comment really made my day. 
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I like your poem. Nice and concise, but still descriptive and effective. For me personally, less is best. Can’t stand the flowery, lengthy stuff.
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