Poetry Attempt

I’m a complete amateur but here goes.

Silence echoes in a tomb,
Laughter cackles in a hearth.

The corpse worshiped,
With homes forgotten.

Just a shortie.


Tells a great story with such little words! I like it. And you’re humble. That’s always a good thing.

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Thank you, that comment really made my day. :slight_smile:


I like your poem. Nice and concise, but still descriptive and effective. For me personally, less is best. Can’t stand the flowery, lengthy stuff.

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