My second attempt at poetry

“Ode to an Eternal Lover”

A balmy Spring day,
A single feather; floating gently, aimlessly, in an airy breeze,
Somehow lands right in your big yappy mouth and you choke and turn blue and die.

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My gosh. That’s a really tragic poem.

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Yeah, one of the great tragic sonnets of our time.

I do like feathers… Just saying.

Nice to see you being creative :+1:

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I like it how it changes scenery in my head all the sudden!

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The irony. You are capable of something I will never be. Were you my pawn all along?

If not for you, the greatest injustice in history would have happened.

My brain doesn’t work for that sort of stuff.

A poem by slither thing.

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I love this. 1515

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lol nice poem =D

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Troll much?..

Not as much as your neighbours.

The middle finger to ya all.

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Who is that, are you @revv?

Oh my lol 151515

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That sounds very dark…

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This had me in tears. Did you have to kill off the protagonist?!

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Are you a broken down cab operator by any chance ?

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