My poem rap

Okay this is the fourth thread im posting this In but the more I listen to this the more proud of myself I am so I’m giving it it’s own thread

I had some help writing this from lau tzus Tao the Ching but nonetheless

‘so far from the norm like the ice rock pluto’. Great lyric.

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I liked “I desire non-desire” :blush:

Thanks a lot everhopeful it means a lot coming from you :sunny:

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Yeah, that’s ok - a lot of us feel like that at least some of the time. Did you write it? Is that your voice and picture?

Yeah that’s all me.

I wrote it but found some inspiration from Taoist philosophy.