My poem I shared in class

We were given these words

Needle
BlackBerry
Cloud
Cliff
Mother
Voice
Lunge
Whir

Make a poem with those words.

We were given probably 20 minutes. I wrote this then shared it.

An addicts relapse

He heard his mother’s voice
“Don’t do drugs, don’t use those needles.”
So instead, the junky takes a lunge for the blackberry brandy, and relapses.
In a different way. Suddenly he hears a whir.
A sound from the skies
The cloud opens up
Another rainy day again
He feels like he fell off of a cliff

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That’s talent incorporating all those words. Using real life experience can carry you far in life!

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