Just wrote a poem about nature

It’ll be better when I make it a song later

Here it goes:

I’m so savage

I manage

To be past average

And then some.

Can’t end none

Of my firey glory

For he

Figures out

About this trigger now

That he’s pulling

On their emotions

Dulling nothing but the shades of the oceans

Waves

Played

these friends

In basketball, till the end

Of the day

Till there’s no rays

Left from the sun

The day is done

For they have none

Delayed this man but now I run

So fast to the destination

You need gas for the Escalade ■■■■

So still I get their sooner

For the man already resorts to humor

Resorts to feeling like June or

July

When the skies are high

From daylight rise

Till the sun barely spies

Behind the clouds

The birds no longer loud

Medicinal herbs for the odd man out

In the squad damn now

Stop and listen

Stare at the deer they’re sipping

Water from the creek by the pond

The river, the fawn, relocate to the lawn

Where they wait for dawn and the birds to sing their songs.

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Very nice! I just got through writing a new song. We should collab one of these days. If you send me raw vocals and the beat you’re using i can mix it for you.

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Right now my microphone doesn’t work that’s why my sound quality is poor. I’d be down though that’d be cool :sunglasses:. I just gotta take it to this place digital fix because the usb drive is what isn’t working rather than the actual mic. Maybe there’s like lint built up in the USB drive and I can take it out with a pointy thing. I’ll let you know when I get it working. Wouldn’t wanna collab unless I had my mic. But definitely would be down when I get it fixed.

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How do you mix songs? Do you use audacity or another program

Ps merry Christmas :christmas_tree:

you’ve got a very unique style

and I like the turns and word play

I can almost imagine this being a song

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Merry christmas to you, too. I mix with adobe audition.

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