First attempt at singing a song

[zwolfgang]

Hey guys, I just made a new song called Wake Up, and I decided to sing this one personally since I put a ton of work into producing it and wanted it to be all me. I just started taking singing lessons but got impatient lol. I know Im not the best singer but I hope you can see past all my mistakes and get some enjoyment out of this

LYRICS:

(Intro)

Verse 1:

Sitting round beside the fire
Watching as the flames go higher and higher

Physical release, who do I want to be
Endless wars and there is one inside of me

Suddenly the ground beneath me, feels so shaky
Nothing left but doubts and kinda, maybes

I will win, but I wont fight
Cardinal sin, the gluttons plight

But I know now

Chorus:

They see me facedown in the mud
Oh no
They see what I dont, but others should
Oh oh
Ill be okay you see, eventually
Soon as I
Wake up
Wake up
Wake up

Bridge

Stuck in a dream
Oh oh oh oh
Stuck in a dream
Makes me wanna scream

Verse 2

Thoughts surround me, dead or dying
Keeps me going, makes me keep on trying

Nothing else is gonna keep me on the chain
Till the words come back and hold me to the flame

Suddenly the air around me, feels uneasy
Nothing left but to shout and make it breezy

I wont win, but I will fight
Original sin, been reborn tonight

And I know now

Chorus:

They see me facedown in the mud
Oh no
They see what I dont, but others should
Oh oh
Ill be okay you see, eventually
Soon as I
Wake up
Wake up
Wake up

Bridge

Stuck in a dream
Oh oh oh oh
Stuck in a dream
Makes me wanna scream

Chorus:

They see me facedown in the mud
Oh no
They see what I dont, but others should
Oh oh
Ill be okay you see, eventually
Soon as I
Wake up
Wake up
Wake up

Wake up…

[everhopeful]

Very good ! Remember us when you’re a big star !

[GrayBear]

Good job. I like it.

[Ninjastar]

I love it! I love all your music.

[anon57786250]

Nice @zwolfgang !

Getting some Nirvana vibes from this !

[zwolfgang]

Thanks guys! Idk about the big star thing haha but no matter where my music takes me you guys were always the first to believe in me, Ill never forget

[Moonbeam]

I really like it @zwolfgang. Maybe you can find other musicians to collaborate with in Stockholm. It might be a good way to make some friends.

[PinCushion]

Stuck in a dream reminds me of how I feel after I’ve let a really relaxed fart.
Good song. Did you get your name from Wolfgang Mozart?

[Sezbot241]

I really love the guitar in the song. Good job at your first attempt at singing. You can only keep getting better with practice.

[zwolfgang]

@Moonbeam Thank you! I will for sure find other like-minded musicians here, there is an opera school right across the street from my apartment!

@PinCushion That made me lol! Thanks, my name comes from the fact that my Dad is German and wanted to give me a German name

@Sezbot241 Thanks! I think I was holding back a bit because Im self-conscious of my voice. I was told by someone else that that comes with practice, so practice I will! I appreciate the love for the guitar, thats my main strength