"Crazy" poem by Me tell me what you guys think

Have you ever thought like you were slowly losing your mind
Because your starting to see things that are wonderful and divine
Sometimes they seem so real that you forget the month day and time
Or maybe it’s just the fact that your starting to see
Opening up your eyes and looking at things how their supposed to be
Like its time for you to know your true self and get out of the sea
Cuz See we
All know that people want us to stay low
They want us ignorant to be slow
That way when they make us fall down we don’t even know
But now your opening up and you’ve become a hazard
To what people are trying to do so they call you a crasher
Now your struggling to get through things you should have already mastered
Here you are at a crossroads not knowing what to do
Saying it’s got you so confused you forgot what equals two times two
Then you sink down into depression and start singing the blues
Because you
Don’t know your left from your right
There’s darkness all around and it’s getting harder to see the light
You’re worn down worn out about to give up the fight
But you
Shouldn’t let things get so hazy
And you
Shouldn’t let people become lack-si-daisy
Just sit down and think to yourself
Am I
Really
Crazy???

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it’s good man… kind of rough in some spots…

care if I edit?

Have you ever thought you were slowly losing your mind
things ren’t supposed to be that are wonderful and divine

Sometimes they seem so real
you forget the month day and time

Or maybe it’s just the fact that your starting to see
Opening up your eyes and catching a glimpse of how they’re supposed to be
Like its time for you to know your true self and get out of the sea

Cuz See we all know
that people want us to stay low
They want us ignorant and slow
So when they make us fall down
we don’t even know

But now you’ve opened up and became a hazard
Going against the current, upsetting the agenda
So they call you out and try to crash you

Now your struggling to get through things you should have already mastered
Here you are at a crossroads not knowing what to do
Saying it’s got you so confused…
you forgot what equals two times two

You sink down into depression and start singing the blues
Because you don’t know your left from your right
There’s darkness all around
it’s getting harder to see the light

You’re worn down and worn out
about to give up the fight

But you shouldn’t let things get so hazy
And you shouldn’t let people become lack-si-daisy

Just sit down and think to yourself
sit down and ask yourself

Am I
Really
Crazy???

(really good stuff man I went ahead and edited because I’m bored and you’re not on…)

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its all good man and I like it

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thats a really great (though perhaps controvercal which makes me love it more) poem it should be titled " am i really crazy ??? " :wink:

edited perfectly also :+1:

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