An attempt

I thought I’d try my hand at a poem.
I don’t know what to say
My parents are only a room away
I’d ask for advice on it but then I’d just owe 'em

Oh, well, I tried. lol.
:rofl:

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I wonder what your parents are thinking in the next room?

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:thinking: They would probably be thinking that they have a bizarre son if they had any idea of the poems I’m making up :stuck_out_tongue:

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I’m sure they think that already! Mine do.

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I actually fibbed slightly in the poem also. While my mom is currently in the next room on her computer…my dad is several rooms away in the living room…but that wouldn’t have rhymed very well :stuck_out_tongue: .

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Good on you for trying. I haven’t written poetry since my college days. I’ve lost my poetic side but I’m okay with that.

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There was once a Mod named Bowens
Who tried his hand at writing poems
He didn’t know what to say
With his parents just a room away
So he posted for advice on the forums
:grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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:rofl:
Nice @Moonbeam !

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Paging @Om_Sadasiva . He’s a poet. I’m surprised @everhopeful hasn’t commented yet.

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I’m impressed! It’s better than all of my stuff put together!

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Oh no. Mine was just silly. Thanks though.

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We wonder what Bowens is doin
As he scribbles feverishly in the next room
He exhibits the air
Of a modern Shakespeare
Perhaps we’ll find out fairly soon

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Why there it’s easy Bowens
What amazes me
The pen writes it self if you remembered where you’ve stored them
Certainly does the treating for me
It rhymes but loosely, I used to to put them in my loose leaf
But my poems are in vacancy

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