A Poem: Zone

I like my
Comfort zone,
I feel comfortable
Within it.

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I will only feel comfortable after I die.

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That’s so sad. There’s no circumstances where you can feel comfortable now?

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Thank you for the empathy @LED I am in very bad health,
with schizophrenia, I have had enough, I don’t seek comfort.
I am happy just to survive somehow.

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Well I hope one day you are able to find some peace. If even only a sliver.

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I never thought of that cartoon in like forever. and somehow, my mind remembered it.
my gosh, what a search algorithm we have.

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a hiaku…

I walk,breathe,eat and live.

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Haha, if it is, it was unintentional! :smile:

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Lolz/… it is like reading the fun section in a newspaper - I come to the forum and read your poems =)

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I liked my

comfort zone
until

someone entered it, then it became my

discomfort zone

my poetry jazz rifft off your original poem!

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