A leaf hung

A leaf
hung from a spider
string, dancing
dancing; a dance
prolonged
and out of time;
the leaf
never free to fall
all the way
and come to
the end
it began -

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Of course I’m going to have to say this is the best poem ever.

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Worlds shortest poem.

“Fleas”

Adam had’em.

You’re your own best critic.

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It was ‘twirling in the wind’ that got me.

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