You couldn’t look me in the eye for the ocean that burns amidst the sky - was a dream known to the Sun’s abound the light of souls as one.- I’d abide If I could take back the lie and undream the sight from your eye-that it was my power, but truly the night only fools know, as i hear the devils bellow
When you’ve seen beyond yourself
Then you may find peace of mind is waiting there.
And the time will come
When you see we’re all one,
And life flows on within you
and without you.
Is this a critique on my dark writing @77nick77 ?
It’s the Beatles critique.
Now, I’m thinking I need to learn English.