Here's 1 of 3 poems, just curious

I wrote 3 poems in 1998 and it was published by the International Poetry Hall of Fame, which is no big deal because if I remember, you paid to have them publish it. I was just wondering if the poems were any indication of my sz. I wasn’t diagnosed until 2002. I just wanted to see what kind of response I would get?? I think it was my illness, but what do you think?

I’ll start with the shortest:

Hungry
Stewing moments, a mirage
law grazing, trough longing
syrup slashing, stokes
oozing vacant rooms
codified echoes
sour, unconscious
inert
dripping forever hungry, the
predator

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it is really fascinating…please publish more…

You can’t tell that you have schizophrenia from that poem.

Thank You, everhopeful!

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